Without Remorse

Without Remorse

563 Reads 12 Votes 4 Part Story
Sarah and Cassie By thescottishangel Updated Jun 12, 2011

Emily Kings is a normal girl. Well, she used to be. She loves life and she has an eye for perfection. That all fell apart when she discovered she had a stalker. One day she decides to clean up her room and finds many random pieces of paper, each has a letter. Can she figure out the message before it's too late? When she figures out the message will anyone believe her? Even when the people she loves leave her in her time of need. When the outcast of the school comes up to her and tells her everything, she doesnt believe him. But as her death draws closer, she suddenly believes him. But is it to late to save her?

madmadouc577 madmadouc577 May 07, 2011
I agree with tianajade... I think she collapses and freaks out either too often, or too easily. And Cass, make sure that you are using the correct "to." I noticed that you used "to" when you should be using "too." Just some things to look out for. Love you guys!