Percy Jackson & chaos' soldiers

Percy Jackson & chaos' soldiers

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Will Goddyn By WillGoddyn Updated Apr 28

Pain. Hurt. Cheated. Betrayed. These are just some things Percy has felt because of those he cared for. He joins Chaos. What will happen when he is assigned a new mission and has to return? What happens when he finds out that the whole universe is in trouble and not just Earth? Will he be able to save everything ever created or is he in over his head? -My first story please read :D

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Wow, usually Percy just blows up a planet or a galaxy XD! Nice control there, Percy.
This has an amazing plot, but it's rushed and you need to put more punctuation and divide it up a little. Some of the sentences you don't even need, or you could make a separate paragraph about.
Tip: don't use that stupid callsign. Leviathan sounds good. So is Hydra, or Thessalhydra.
Why? Why are you using a plotline so overused? The Titans were defeated in the series LITERALLY about their defeat. There are other deities that can be used.
CabooseInUnderpants CabooseInUnderpants Jul 12, 2016
It's always "Nathan", "Jonathan", or "Daniel" as Percy's half-brother's name. Am I the only one feeling kind of excited that his name is neither of those?
It is so weird reading a book where the character has the same last name and first name starting letter. PJ is my nickname too. It's just so strange. Do you know how many times I've been asked if I'm related to Percy Jackson because my name is Paige Jackson????