I really liked your story! I'd you have time, can you read mine too?
I really love the flow of this, you get pulled in and you just have to keep reading. This is defiantly one of my favorites on here.
Love the beat, and lots of emotion. Sort of sad, the mindset. Glad you don't feel like that now :) the begining was awesome, but the ending... I got a little confused.
@yusaalva Lol! Don't worry - I don't feel that way any more! But when I wrote this poem, I was of that mindset. My family and work fulfills me greatly, and I'm mending my spiritual relationship as well. I'm a very happy person now. :)
Oh,, I am sorry that u have experienced so many sad things..
But I am sure u r okay now, right?
Well, me too, my life have its upside n down...
Anyway, I think you're not crazy!
Be happy ... :)
Whoa! Thats a deep one!
Wow!!! How did you make this poem?????
What's up with the russian roullete???