My Poetry- Haiku, Limericks

My Poetry- Haiku, Limericks

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Scott By mylifeisaverage Updated Jan 14, 2011

Just some poetry I wrote as a journal for a few days. No limericks as of yet, but soon.

zephyr21rose zephyr21rose May 02, 2014
I think the initial part of the poem was very well written, but I think that if you include a little more imagery and try to make your poems a little more vivid it would improve drastically. But well done :)
- - Apr 29, 2014
Wow you're pretty good at these! I couldn't even get one out ( poems aren't my forte ) but you go dude!
candy176 candy176 Apr 20, 2014
There are two kinds of "Loath"'s; there's a "loath," which means reluctant (I am loath to do something) and there is "loathe," which means despise!
JCWang JCWang Jul 25, 2013
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SilentLament SilentLament Jan 22, 2013
Hm...I really like the one about imagination/robots. I tend to like musing about things like that.
                              
                              I also really like the last line of the water poem.(:
WordsArePowerFull WordsArePowerFull Aug 01, 2012
I write poetry also, but never could write haiku's. Hmm...? Maybe something I can start doing. I have a blank journal from Coles bookstore, maybe use it for the purpose of haiku's and see what I come up with. Love this so much.