Just some poetry I wrote as a journal for a few days. No limericks as of yet, but soon.
I think the initial part of the poem was very well written, but I think that if you include a little more imagery and try to make your poems a little more vivid it would improve drastically. But well done :)
Wow you're pretty good at these! I couldn't even get one out ( poems aren't my forte ) but you go dude!
There are two kinds of "Loath"'s; there's a "loath," which means reluctant (I am loath to do something) and there is "loathe," which means despise!
For introverts, Facebook is indeed better than hanging out with friends in real life.
Hm...I really like the one about imagination/robots. I tend to like musing about things like that.
I also really like the last line of the water poem.(:
I write poetry also, but never could write haiku's. Hmm...? Maybe something I can start doing. I have a blank journal from Coles bookstore, maybe use it for the purpose of haiku's and see what I come up with. Love this so much.