Limelight

Limelight

3.6K Reads 125 Votes 17 Part Story
Um ... CRAP! I forgot it. By CityGirl26 Updated Apr 02, 2011

You're in the spotlight ... and everyone's waiting to see what you can do. Shadiya Calloway, Nikki Levin and J.J. McQuita are three totally different girls with one thing in common: no real family. They're soon thrown into a complicated world of  jealousy, misunderstandings, crushes and haunting pasts. Thanks to some bad choices, they're all on their own ... unless they can learn to forgive and forget. But that'll be  hard: everyone knows sabotage is always easier forgivness, and hate is easier than love - right?

fuzzybluelizard fuzzybluelizard May 09, 2011
yes i love ur story! I have a similar story but I also made it like Skins!! 
CityGirl26 CityGirl26 Apr 06, 2011
@leamckee yeah, there's no teen dealing with divorce ... it's more about shadiya's relationship with her sister and Hunter, and J.J. and Nikki's relationship, and reality TV and stuff ... not a book about teens and divorce. that's just a bit of background. =)
twilightgurl2 twilightgurl2 Apr 05, 2011
I really liked that and it has intrigued me. I voted and I'm on to Chapter 1! :)
princessB1992 princessB1992 Apr 05, 2011
GEES!!!!! What a perfect start! (well bad for the main character) Lol reading on
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Apr 04, 2011
Great hook. And the fact that it isn't too long keeps your writers wanting more. It was a perfect length and overall great.
chynajade chynajade Apr 04, 2011
Your intro is right on - it hooked the reader's interest straight away.