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When Struck by Lightning

When Struck by Lightning

1.4K Reads 37 Votes 6 Part Story
Karen By karebear17 Updated Mar 14, 2011

Two sisters, One bolt of light. They are soon to be thrust into a world of unimaginable magnitude. The world as they knew it is gone, replaced by visions, secrets, abilities, and destinies. Will they overcome their bickering and differences long enough to achieve an impossible goal... with their lives entwined so tightly and a future to save, only Evalina and Ebony can say for sure.

karebear17 karebear17 Feb 23, 2013
@Alicia15b haha It still needs a lot of work. Bit as far as glutts... Thats her nickname for a gluttony demon. XD
karebear17 karebear17 Feb 22, 2013
@pleasedontgo ThankyouXD I really appreciate the feedback *gets giddy happy feeling inside*
pleasedontgo pleasedontgo Feb 22, 2013
This is really good,I like the details and it's also very rare to find a book about sisters. The demons were described really well and as a whole the thing flowed and made sense! Keep writing.
karebear17 karebear17 Jan 25, 2013
@timothyhayden but youre right about the hook. hmm i shall sit upon my trusty swivel chair and ponder this
karebear17 karebear17 Jan 25, 2013
@timothyhayden true but its supposed to seem childish. she is still young and I did write this story awhile agoXD It still need a lot of work