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Daughter 4254

Daughter 4254

1M Reads 18.5K Votes 30 Part Story
Leigh Statham By LeighStatham Completed

Daughter4254 used to think life in a community where art, music and names are outlawed would suffocate her creative spirit. Now that she’s rotting in a prison cell, she’s not sure her dying mother made the right choice when she entrusted her with the secrets of rebellion. Prison has given her plenty of time to relive every mistake and lose all hope. Her next stop is the MindWipe.

Then she meets Thomas, a fellow inmate, who tells her stories of the mythical mountain colonies where people have names and the arts thrive. Together they plot an escape, knowing if they fail, they will die. Or worse, their consciousness will be taken by the MindWipe, leaving their bodies free for the government to use. When nothing goes as planned, Daughter4254 must choose between using her mother's secret to better the world she hates, or following Thomas to the quiet life of freedom she has always craved.

JensoCam JensoCam Mar 27
Ugh, I'm dying to know how she got into prison in the first place.
Neuroadvanced in this world seems to indicate the ability to follow directions rather than think for oneself. I'm glad the daughter is neurodeficient. It shows she can still think for herself.
ThereGoesInfinity ThereGoesInfinity Aug 16, 2016
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Moonchicky Moonchicky Apr 30, 2016
One of my favorites I wish I had a hard cover copy of this book
Dogsandcats3 Dogsandcats3 May 09, 2016
That is sick and twisted. I already despise this obviously corrupted government.
Ali_Nicole_ Ali_Nicole_ Jan 01, 2016
This idea is beautiful and your writing is fantastic! Definitely gonna save this book and read it when i have a good chunk of time! Great work!!