The Angel's Sacrifice

The Angel's Sacrifice

34 Part Story 94K Reads 1.5K Votes
Fae By GreekStarGazer Completed

When Fae is taken from her home with out warning, she is thrust farther into the relm of Heaven and Hell than she ever wanted to. As a Falling Angel plots to take her love, a Fallen Angel simply plans to take her soul. Desperatly trying to fight the two forces, she begins to love her capture and maybe even he in return.

BlackRoseBriar BlackRoseBriar Mar 29, 2016 03:27PM
I'm not sure if anyone's mentioned this to you, but you misspell 'realm' in your blurb.  I'm also not sure if you mean she begins to like her capture or her capturer, in which case she would fall for 'him' in return (rather than 'he').
ArchAngel6 ArchAngel6 Oct 15, 2013 04:47AM
i got hooked the first paragraph! you keep this up. you deserve to be published.
motherofdemon motherofdemon Aug 15, 2012 09:58PM
i like it  keep writing more stories and maybe you can become a famous  author
Daydream2much Daydream2much Dec 20, 2011 06:32PM
Absolutely loved your beginning.  Gonna read more later.  :-)
falleninlove falleninlove Dec 20, 2011 02:00AM
The introduction is incredible. (: It reeled me in as a reader.
                                    Good job, I like it. (:
This is an amazing first chapter! I fanned and voted! :) I really liked the beginning sequence leading to her capture. You certainly grabbed my attention with your writing and kept the storyline fresh and unpredictable. I really liked it!