The Angel's Sacrifice

The Angel's Sacrifice

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Fae By GreekStarGazer Completed

When Fae is taken from her home without warning, she is thrust further into the realm of Heaven and Hell than she ever wanted to. As a Falling Angel plots to take her love, a Fallen Angel simply plans to take her soul. Desperately trying to fight the two forces, she begins to love her capture and maybe even he in return.

I'm not sure if anyone's mentioned this to you, but you misspell 'realm' in your blurb.  I'm also not sure if you mean she begins to like her capture or her capturer, in which case she would fall for 'him' in return (rather than 'he').
ArchAngel6 ArchAngel6 Oct 15, 2013
i got hooked the first paragraph! you keep this up. you deserve to be published.
motherofdemon motherofdemon Aug 15, 2012
i like it  keep writing more stories and maybe you can become a famous  author
Daydream2much Daydream2much Dec 20, 2011
Absolutely loved your beginning.  Gonna read more later.  :-)
falleninlove falleninlove Dec 20, 2011
The introduction is incredible. (: It reeled me in as a reader.
                              Good job, I like it. (:
FromYourBiggestFan FromYourBiggestFan Jul 22, 2011
This is an amazing first chapter! I fanned and voted! :) I really liked the beginning sequence leading to her capture. You certainly grabbed my attention with your writing and kept the storyline fresh and unpredictable. I really liked it!