Colson (Editing)

Colson (Editing)

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September Kaszton ღ By SeptemberKaszton20 Updated Mar 13, 2015

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Alexis Colson has lost everything, her twin brother died and her parents abandoned her. She always knew her brothers death was no accident and when FBI special agent Jake Parker arrests her after receiving classified evidence she realizes she is in way over her head. Helping the FBI, trying to bring justice to her brother and learning how to let people in.

- - Jul 13, 2015
Nailed it! Love the whole thing but running sentences seemed to occur often.
ashh2003 ashh2003 Jun 26, 2015
I am absolutely looking forward to your next chapter great start please continue. a
Heroes360 Heroes360 Jun 21, 2015
Love the story. I love how the reader can engage and relate to the character.
Heroes360 Heroes360 Jun 20, 2015
Really loved this bit it really describes/brings out her character.
TheTruthFairy1 TheTruthFairy1 Jun 17, 2015
It's really good except you have a lot of run-on sentences. 
AABookNerd AABookNerd Jun 16, 2015
*whispers* the young John Winchester 
                              this is a great story btw