The Alpha's Submissive

The Alpha's Submissive

292K Reads 6.5K Votes 18 Part Story
Olivia By Storyfanatic1 Updated Jan 28

"Submit." The word sounds harsh and passionate. The man acts so bipolar, and it was attractive. "No," I answer, turning my head away from him. Unfortunatley, he uses it as an advantage and brings his lips to my neck, planting small kisses everywhere and leaving a trail burning like fire. I squirm against the wall, biting my lip to keep a moan from escaping. "Luce, darling," he whispers, his hot breath fanning onto my skin. I gasp, "Oh, please!" "Tell me," he demands. I lightly shake my head, denying his request. "Baby," his kisses continue to my jaw. "Give in." I can't stay away any longer, I press my chest into his, and manage the words that will give my mate and I pleasure, "I belong to you in everyway; I'm yours."

KingKai2004 KingKai2004 Sep 17
BRUH I have read almost all of your books. You are killing me. Please, I'm begging you, UPDATE
KatieKatt23 KatieKatt23 Jan 29, 2014
hi I was just wondering if you would possible update because I really like this and believe if you also liked it you should continue with writing I really love it well love ya
just_that_girl03 just_that_girl03 Jan 08, 2014
Just from this little snippet of the book it is already a good story! I really hope you continue with it! ( and god people can be rude but I'm glad you write for you! I do too)
cablm07 cablm07 Nov 30, 2013
sounds like its gonna be a good book! Hope that you update soon!
Storyfanatic1 Storyfanatic1 Nov 24, 2013
To lalacrazii thank you for your input. It's too bad I'm not going to rewrite it, because I myself write for pleasure. I don't aim to please you. Thanks again. Bye now.
RavenDoll RavenDoll Oct 07, 2013
Well, it's not even the first chapter... But hopefully it'll be good?