Subjective Awareness [Reworked]

Subjective Awareness [Reworked]

2.5K Reads 62 Votes 13 Part Story
Courtney By Amarante Updated Jun 29, 2011

There is a strange place underground where no one would expect. Humans don't know about it; they can't even see it. But now it made itself known to the most peculiar people who find themselves thrust into something they can't handle. Some are lucky to realize something beyond their control is going on and search for the truth; others aren't. Their light-years apart paths lead them to same crossroad where they can find the power to overcome it. The main character, Adel, is a young adult who's been blocking her past, but dreading her future. As her life quickly unravels, she is faced with terror that she's never known but also the opportunity to embark on a new life if she dares to take the risk.

icecream2468 icecream2468 Apr 12, 2011
Is this story targeted toward teenagers?
                              For some reason, after reading the first sentence, I didn't want to read it anymore. For me, It wasn't a good enough hook. I don't know if it's just me..... 
                              
Amarante Amarante Mar 10, 2011
@dutroux Thank you so much! I don't know why I didn't get this message. :)
AnInnocentBystander AnInnocentBystander Jan 14, 2011
Like everyone else has already said, still enjoying this immensely :D
Amarante Amarante Jan 14, 2011
@Kizz15 Haha yeah, I like it too, it's way different than usual for siblings and i like that its not conformed to it. and yeah, I thought you would. =3  I can't wait either. :P
Amarante Amarante Jan 14, 2011
@Pookelus Thanks for reading! And yeah I will hopefully soon, the first chap is up as well. 
                              
                              @TheOrangutan Yay I'm glad then. =D
                              
                              @Kizz15 Thanks a lot, I like it too. Yay hope you like it. =3