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Not Of This World

Not Of This World

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Eden aka Black October By Ed-rom Updated Jun 15, 2011

This is a collection of poems all bearing some reference to an escape from reality and what they are. I selected these one to post because i feel they have a sort of ghosty and avoided topic. Hope you Enjoy Eden.

MistDragon MistDragon Jan 29, 2011
This is a really good poem. Maybe you should rethink  at which points you start a new line on, though. only on some lines like : "I fear the answer, {here it might be better to end this line and start a new one}. That's line 24. It's a really good poem though.
Ed-rom Ed-rom Jan 06, 2011
haha thanks this isnt from experience dont worry :)
                              i kind of took the way i was mentally treated in secondary school and turned it into a physical abuse. i never really expected it to be so powerful as i didnt really consider my experiences that bad but ... 
elethewombat elethewombat Oct 24, 2010
okkkkkkk so i only just read this- i know i know im getting behind
                              its really complex, i cant really understand it all but its really good. i really like it xxx