Fearless Fiery Beauty

Fearless Fiery Beauty

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Kaytlyn Ann Hand By Kaytlyn_Hand Completed

How do you tell the difference between adventurous and life-threatening if you are impervious to fear?

You could ask Edana Keelia Greenwood, a 17 year old girl that most would refer to as ‘delinquent’, but considering the mess she got herself into, she obviously doesn’t even know herself.

Her dad left when she was a child and Edana supports her mother, by way of numerous criminal activities, and she always has to keep her friends at arm’s length.  They suspect Edana has a big secret, but no-one knows what it is.  

Enter Darren Silex, a man with secrets of his own.  In a moment of rash intrigue, Edana reveals her secret.  Her worst mistake ever, and unfortunately, only her first.

Darren becomes paranoid: fearful that her secret will consequently reveal his.  Plans of kidnap are born from his paranoia, but Edana is not the easiest girl to get to.  Thankfully, for Darren at least, his stooge catches her at exactly the right moment.  She’s bored, got nothing to do, all her friends are busy… Hey, why not allow yourself to be kidnapped?  That was her second mistake.

Thankfully, her kidnappers are completely unprepared for the whirlwind that is Edana.  They reach a stalemate.  Their secret must be protected, but they just don’t have the heart to hurt her, especially since most have somehow come to care for the crazy girl.  They don’t know what to do with her, so they take her to the one man who does, Gabriel Potens.  There, she discovers a prophecy - a prophecy that Gabriel is convinced is about her.  He makes her an offer she can’t refuse, but accepting the offer was her third and final mistake.

Gabriel begins to lead her down a path she'd rather avoid.  Forcing her into a world she never knew existed and she isn't sure she'll escape alive.

Good thing she's impervious to fear.

solardaze solardaze Sep 24
Too much detail we all knows what happens in the shower and getting dressed
solardaze solardaze Jun 16, 2015
I like your idea of story found that your descriptions of everything to much details = boring. Nice long chapters are good. I'm skimming over the chapter now as a lot of information isn't moving the story along.
Mar-Hime Mar-Hime May 03, 2015
Gosh, I'm starting to love her even more. She's the epitome of badass. Hahaha!
BadGirl9151 BadGirl9151 Mar 13, 2015
I remember when I was 3 I started singing along with this song and lets just say this was the song I sang 2 years later at sharing talent show my mom was not happy to get a call from the principle talking about my song choice s
Iluv2edgedSword Iluv2edgedSword Oct 27, 2013
I'm surely gonna read it! But due 2 school learning and exams coming up..... Hmm.... I'll b late in reading it if u don't mind:)
                              Dude why don't u have any comments?
AbbyHudson3 AbbyHudson3 Sep 25, 2012
This book was AMAZING, I couldn't put my phone down in school