Drowning | ✓

Drowning | ✓

20.2K Reads 2.4K Votes 24 Part Story
⊹ inactive-lei ⊹ By ceraunophic Completed

in which she writes poems to show others they're not alone. 

all rights reserved 2016 LeiLani N.

[Cover by @lets-defeat-the-huns]

{Highest ranking: #21//poetry}

  • angst
  • journal
  • life
  • pain
  • poems
  • poetry
  • poetryfrompain
Only criticism is that you should be more confident in your work it’s really beautiful, but reading that first authors note I think that some might not give it a chance ❤️
TheLuniToons TheLuniToons Jul 03, 2017
love, this isn't gross. What's gross is the attitude you have about your beautiful work of art. Don't cut off your beautiful wings so others can fly. You have a talent and if you don't build yourself up it could stop you from flying, and maybe even helping others fly.
gloomriferous gloomriferous Jun 28, 2017
It's absolutely beautiful. Certain words are used so gorgeously!
afirecamz afirecamz Apr 28
yeet, i'm supposed to be doing schoolworks but i have read the first chapter (this) and i knew i had to give up school for once just to read this kind of poetry. keep going, i bet all of them are wonderful even if i haven't read all just yet.
eccentric_authoress eccentric_authoress Aug 18, 2017
what are you talking about???? It's totally awesome-sauce! I stink at rhyming stuff :/
inscent inscent Jul 11, 2017
I sometimes feel the same thing...I always feel why did I even born???