Pretty Paper Dolls

Pretty Paper Dolls

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lahni000 By lahni000 Updated Jul 26, 2013

The Two Gardenia Girls weren't just pretty. They were gorgeous and they were the envy of all the girls in the neighborhood. 

The Gardenia Girls had it all clothes, money, looks.

But there had always been a mysterious air around the girls, and there was only one person that truly understood their pain.

puppluv puppluv Jan 15, 2011
I like the way you organized it, and as far as I could tell, there wasn't any mistakes. I actually really liked it :)! But are all those bruises and scars really from her being really super clumsy or something else? 
                              Good job :)