Poems about nature, change and the Cycle of Life
@KyraRoad Well, that's just the way the world works isn't it: in full circle. You know I'm glad you mentioned that thing about singing the poem, because I often find my self humming the words of poems that have a really nice rhyme scheme or rhythm. It's nice to know I'm not the only one :)
Hey great job! I really like this poem. I actually ended up singing it a bit, it has a happy tune, then it gets a bit grave during the winter part but you bring it full circle with the last line!
@Worldchanger72 That's also what I like most about this poem. The idea came to me in a single inspirational moment, but took a very long time to perfect.
@whickwithy I'll send you one of the poems, but the the other is far too long for these character-limiting messages.
And depending on your opinion, I'll decide whether I should append them onto "Age in Laughter".
@HIndia You've left me such nice comments that the words "thank you" just seem really inadequate for the gladness I felt when I read them.
@NidaBhatti No problem I was going to in my next chapter update anyhow ;)
And I think you are right- it was Keats I am thinking about :)