Deep Slumber | ✓

Deep Slumber | ✓

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ten [on hiatus] By kittenten10 Completed

"Wake up," he whispered with so much desperation and deep sorrow.
    
    I stayed completely and utterly still, not having the ability to move or even open a single eyelid. When he didn't receive a response, I felt the warmth of his hand leave mine and heard him leave silently out of the room. 
    
    I wanted to cry right then and there but I can't. I can't move, producing a single tear would be more impossible. 
    
    It hurts so much when I hear people talking around me, talking about me and my condition. It hurts to hear them cry and not be able to comfort them. I'm just increasing their pain by not making a single move or just a twitch of a muscle. 
    
    It hurts to know that I'm only lying down on a bed with a machine keeping me alive, keeping me from being engulfed into imperishable oblivion.

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KellyGe KellyGe Mar 22
That last line is relatable, like all the cute guys I meet LOLOL :"))
maurealis maurealis Feb 09
omg i read the start in a mellow tone and i was so calm but as I got to this part. im going crazy. why all of the sudden. xD i wasn't ready.... xD