Initial Murders

Initial Murders

370 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
tormented claustrophibic By ConverseAngel Updated Jan 12, 2011

THe ongoing massacre of loving murders by jason taylor

Neonnerd Neonnerd Jun 14, 2011
Oh my gosh O.o that was so good! I'm completely scarred for life LMBO. XD
EvilRaccoonBabies EvilRaccoonBabies Jan 17, 2011
I think this is interesting, but there are a lot of grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors which, sadly, take away from this. I think you should definitely go back and revise this. It'd look a lot better and it'd be easier to appreciate. I like this idea, but it needs a lot of editing.