Tales of Harmonin

12 Part Story 816 Reads 7 Votes
Leo Hevia By leohevia18 Updated 3 years ago
Tales of Harmonin: The first part in an epic long saga. Tales of Harmonin is a science fiction fantasy taking place in an alternate universe of the milky way galaxy. The two main protagonist and their childhood friends wake up in a new world a thousand years into the future and are forced to come to terms that Earth no longer exists and everyone they knew and cared about are gone. As they look for answers as to why they’re no longer on Earth, they must survive the challenges ahead of them as a galaxy on the brink of war threatens to destroy the balance of life and ruin their friendship and sanity.
    As the main cast begin to realize what human nature is capable of and discover forbidden secrets that have been locked away for eons. 
    
    This unique book; in not only its story and characters, but in the manner that it is told, has been written and designed as a “literal” graphic novel. The book’s written text on the left side of the book, contains about three paragraphs. Then on the right side of the book, there are illustrations in comic book form. Each panel representing  2-3 scenes happening in each paragraph. With this form of visual and descriptive writing I am creating a novel that will excite the reader as they visually see what they are reading as well as help those who are more accustomed to learning visually than mentally. 
    
    We've already completed the manuscript, and are currently working on the illustrations with my artist John Tanco-Rahim. I’ve drawn some of the concept art of the first three chapters and you can see some of John's renders on the facebook page via the link below You can also email me using the email below.
    
    https://www.facebook.com/pages/Tales-of-Harmonin/121846061320255?bookmark_t=page
    
    leohevia18@gmail.com
    
    Author's Note: I've edited the Prologue and chapters 1-3. They have an over all darker tone and much more detail added. We hope everyone enjoys!
Good, Leo.  You just need to put in more details.  By putting in details, I will be reading the story exactly the way YOU want it as opposed to me inserting my own details.  A place where I think you need more detail is where you talk about Lucrecia's beauty.  What made her so beautiful?  Her eyes? lips? hair? big boob? her walk? her voice? her beautiful face?  the way she dressed?  all of the above?
                                    
                                    If he was so in love with her because of her beauty, he must have everything memorized!
Good, Leo.  You just need to put in more details.  By putting in details, I will be reading the story exactly the way YOU want it as opposed to me inserting my own details.  A place where I think you need more detail is where you talk about Lucrecia's beauty.  What made her so beautiful?  Her eyes? lips? hair? big boob? her walk? her voice? her beautiful face?  the way she dressed?  all of the above?
                                    
                                    If he was so in love with her because of her beauty, he must have everything memorized!
Good, Leo.  You just need to put in more details.  By putting in details, I will be reading the story exactly the way YOU want it as opposed to me inserting my own details.  A place where I think you need more detail is where you talk about Lucrecia's beauty.  What made her so beautiful?  Her eyes? lips? hair? big boob? her walk? her voice? her beautiful face?  the way she dressed?  all of the above?
                                    
                                    If he was so in love with her because of her beauty, he must have everything memorized!
Good, Leo.  You just need to put in more details.  By putting in details, I will be reading the story exactly the way YOU want it as opposed to me inserting my own details.  A place where I think you need more detail is where you talk about Lucrecia's beauty.  What made her so beautiful?  Her eyes? lips? hair? big boob? her walk? her voice? her beautiful face?  the way she dressed?  all of the above?
                                    
                                    If he was so in love with her because of her beauty, he must have everything memorized!