Oblivious

Oblivious

3.8K Reads 90 Votes 13 Part Story
I'm Yuu, but I'm me! Not me Yuu... (not actually my name) By Evil_Angel_Deathwish Completed

I never wanted too be a rock star, but when does life do what you want?

poisonedperspective poisonedperspective Nov 28, 2011
It's a great start, I like how the intro flows, but the last line I thought was the best, it was short, but managed to bridge a way into the next page. There are just a few spelling an punctuation errors. Overall I can't wait to see what happens next
sagomeetword sagomeetword Oct 04, 2011
lol this looks like its gonna be fun.... why r u using 'too' instead of 'to' everywhere though :P ...
                              
                              *voted*
SaraDillon1 SaraDillon1 Jan 11, 2011
lol...i love this!!! nickleback are amazing...so much better than Justin Bieber :)
                              good job :)
                              xox