I never wanted too be a rock star, but when does life do what you want?
It's a great start, I like how the intro flows, but the last line I thought was the best, it was short, but managed to bridge a way into the next page. There are just a few spelling an punctuation errors. Overall I can't wait to see what happens next
lol this looks like its gonna be fun.... why r u using 'too' instead of 'to' everywhere though :P ...
lol...i love this!!! nickleback are amazing...so much better than Justin Bieber :)
good job :)