Trust Me

Trust Me

15.4K Reads 205 Votes 15 Part Story
Maddy By maddy-bambi224 Updated Jul 24, 2012

When Jake discovers the mysterious Juliette hidden in his beach box, little does he realise that his life is about to change forever. "Trust me" she says but can he trust a beautiful stranger?

littlebirdie_ littlebirdie_ Jul 17, 2011
Whoa! This really draws the reader in. At least it did me. Interesting & awesome! Very descriptive and clear, wonderful job!ツ
WhiskeyMouth WhiskeyMouth Jun 18, 2011
I love your writing. I don't think you should edit anything, either.
XundecidedX XundecidedX Jun 18, 2011
Eeek! What a beginning. Your writing was coherent enough to make this girl's situation understandable, but at the same time feel the urgency and stress that she was going through. I am worried about her and I don't even know her name. What is she running from? Hmmm. Guess I'll read on. Voted. 
xLeavexThisxsitex xLeavexThisxsitex Jan 22, 2011
*smile* mysterious beginning, but i think this should have been the prologue..
StudioWreck StudioWreck Jan 21, 2011
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Unknown2me Unknown2me Jan 18, 2011
Wow, awesome.  You're a talented writer.  Have you written before?  If not, this was an incredible start for a beginning story.