Bittersweet Love- An Indian love story(completed)

Bittersweet Love- An Indian love story(completed)

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shakthi By shakthi Completed

"payal,where the hell are-hey!"rishy moved just in time,the gleaming blade in the dark missed him by inches.

"payal!"rishy got hold of her wrist,but she was fighting hard.rishy gripped her wrist in an iron grip and pushed her against the wall.

"PAYAL!"Rishy shouted.

"rishy?"she stilled for a moment.He reached out with the other hand and switched on the light. 

payal was in a lavender night dress that was clinging to her body.her brown hair was a mess,her chest raising and falling.

Rishy couldn't resist the temptation,he closed the distance between them.pressing her soft body against him and kissing her gently.

The knife fell down with a sound.
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Rishikesh raj wants revenge for getting his twin sister nearly dead in a car crash,but he is met with a surprise when he meets payal rao aka pavy,who is supposed to be his enemy's sister.he tries to stick to his plan of revenge but it seems more difficult than he thought and he is thrown between love and his plan of revenge!

-Omkara -Omkara Dec 18, 2015
Kerala!!!..i am a keralite...
                              Loving the story..plot is very interesting
Kriti08 Kriti08 Jun 16, 2015
I love the starting. But why is 't' spelled as 'th' everytime.
Kriti08 Kriti08 Jun 16, 2015
VIREN AND JEEVIKA <3_<3 OMG I AM SO EXCITED EVEN BEFORE READING THE STORY
snakeysnake7 snakeysnake7 May 31, 2015
DULQUER SALMAAN!!! OMFG... I LOVE HIM :)  and oh ur story is great! Keep posting! 
shakthi shakthi Feb 18, 2014
I will keep that in mind:)Thank you for your sincere openion!
AuthorFarahK AuthorFarahK Feb 17, 2014
This is a clever first chapter but as a reader, I would prefer if you made it longer. I've given this advice to many other authors. You should always try to make your first chapter interesting and at least three to four pages long. Great job anyway :)