Quiet Adoration

Quiet Adoration

597 Reads 19 Votes 1 Part Story
Lauren Castner By LaurenCastner Completed

Two young people start their day off by having some fun in the snow. A swift tackle and a shivering face brings them closer together as he invites her to his home where he prepares her a cup of hot chocolate which ends in a mess and more importantly, a kiss.

S0LACE S0LACE Dec 03, 2013
This is the sweetest short story that I have ever read. It is brilliantly written. Perfection from beginning to end :D
                              
                              Truly, I believe that it deserves way more reads. 
                              
                              Keep up the amazing work :D
xDareToCarex xDareToCarex Feb 09, 2011
That was a very good short story. It had just the right amount of details, narration and of course romance! Continue with the good work.
                              
                              Dare :)
- - Jan 17, 2011
Sweet ending! I heart your title. Quiet Adoration...why don't I ever come up with titles like that? I feel that your description summarizes the story rather than hinting towards the beginning, but this is a short story (which I don't read often) so it seems alright to me!!! 0u0