Blues

Blues

1.4K Reads 331 Votes 3 Part Story
raghdanezzat By raghdanezzat Updated Oct 23

The folks are irresistible..


An exceedingly ambitious girl enters the den of "The Folks"- a group of related rich students- and her life gets turned upside down, especially when she finds herself falling for the worst of them, Dylan Evans.

will she become one of them?

DG_and_Reid DG_and_Reid Oct 25
Interesting and dramatic start.
                              
                              Your writing is easy to read.
maisiemdb maisiemdb Oct 25
@raghdanezzat 
                              Good so far!! I like the mystery about not knowing anything yet! You gave just enough information to grab people's interest and make them want to read more!!
Wow. what a start. I didn't expect that ending.
                              
                              Let's see how to find out what happened to her father.
@raghdanezzat Extremely good so far! It's definitely got this chapter/prologue as it's hook. I'm excited to continue!
OhThomasina OhThomasina Oct 23
ok I know it sounds like I'm reading this bc u asked but honestly  you write really consistently and I'm in love With this beginning
Here for the read request you sent me earlier! I really liked the synopsis and think it can turn into an interesting story. Kudos for writing in English too. Sometimes I don't even understand my own language, I couldn't imagine trying to write in another.