Blues

Blues

1.6K Reads 353 Votes 3 Part Story
raghdanezzat By raghdanezzat Updated Oct 23, 2016

The folks are irresistible..


An exceedingly ambitious girl enters the den of "The Folks"- a group of related rich students- and her life gets turned upside down, especially when she finds herself falling for the worst of them, Dylan Evans.

will she become one of them?

henry2131 henry2131 Dec 21, 2016
Your writing is wonderful!  Your grammar and spelling is better than most people who grew up here. The only thing that caught my attention was you wrote Im instead of I'm. But I still knew what you meant. Can't wait to read more!
DG_and_Reid DG_and_Reid Oct 25, 2016
Interesting and dramatic start.
                              
                              Your writing is easy to read.
maisiemdb maisiemdb Oct 25, 2016
@raghdanezzat 
                              Good so far!! I like the mystery about not knowing anything yet! You gave just enough information to grab people's interest and make them want to read more!!
RogmaryPerezP RogmaryPerezP Oct 25, 2016
Wow. what a start. I didn't expect that ending.
                              
                              Let's see how to find out what happened to her father.
AddictedtoMusic12 AddictedtoMusic12 Oct 26, 2016
@raghdanezzat Extremely good so far! It's definitely got this chapter/prologue as it's hook. I'm excited to continue!
OhThomasina OhThomasina Oct 23, 2016
ok I know it sounds like I'm reading this bc u asked but honestly  you write really consistently and I'm in love With this beginning