Held [Completed]

Held [Completed]

346K Reads 8K Votes 38 Part Story
N.K. By NKSamrose Completed

Olivia Walters and Jake Rhodes have no choice but to survive in the hands of a delusional thief/ abductor. He takes what he wants when he wants. Well, objects that is, until one night things go awry and he is forced to do the unthinkable. 

One late night, sixteen-year-old Olivia Walters awakens to the sound of gunshots. Fearing the worst, she panics and runs downstairs only to be stopped by the sight of her parents lying lifeless on the foyer floor. They had just returned from a late night movie when they walked in on the masked thief turned murderer. A gasp escapes her lips, forcing the man to look up and see her. With fear coursing through her cold veins, she tries to run only to be caught by him. In the midst of his stronghold around her neck, she pleads for her life and promises not to tell the police. This sparks an idea in him. If she does talk he'll get sent to prison so to prevent that from happening, he takes her from her home. The home he was burglarizing. The same home he murdered her parents in.  

"I always take something with me. Just think of yourself as my personal souvenir." He whispers lustfully into my ear, making the hair on my neck stand up.  


*Please remember this story is fiction so some things may seem unrealistic*

Rated PG-13 for Mild Violence, Mature Content, and Strong Language

© Copyright All Rights Reserved 2014.

Cover by moi! :)

As of 9/24/14 Random #18
Teen Fiction #95

EveSlim EveSlim Jun 22, 2016
OMG THANKKKK YOU, THANK....YOU finally I found a book where the girl doesn't fall for the kidnapper cause I was literally starting to get mad if I didn't
The trailer which u have taken is from which movie plzz reply
WildExotic WildExotic Mar 17, 2016
Damn. Idk what to feel. Like I'm not mad at his decision but i don't want Olivia to get hurt.
izzyroseisbae izzyroseisbae Mar 18, 2015
Well then...... Someone woke up on the wrong side of the floor xD
HTMwrites HTMwrites Jan 20, 2015
Wow, Naya you are so gifted! Your writing style distinctly reminds me of "Karen Slaughter", she writes a similar genre and you had me gripped from the first page like she did! I see why this has so many reads, lol definitely well deserved. can't wait to read more  :)
HTMwrites HTMwrites Jan 19, 2015
Oh wow.  The synopsis seem super intense!  I'm adding this to my reading list :)