From One heart to the next

From One heart to the next

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tormented claustrophibic By ConverseAngel Updated Jan 12, 2011

Truth be told, Heavens looking glass, broken

Neonnerd Neonnerd Jun 14, 2011
</3 This made me so sad. I seriously have tears in my eyes. Lmbo. It's obvious enough to say I love this poem. :D
writexmusic writexmusic Jan 22, 2011
@EvilRaccoonBabies i agree with the punctuation and grammar, just cause it makes it easier for the reader to comprehend as well as looks more polished. but great job
EvilRaccoonBabies EvilRaccoonBabies Jan 13, 2011
I really like this poem, but again, punctuation. If that is your style, however, by all means, keep it the way it is. I love work that is uniquely styled. This is even better than the first poem of yours that I looked at. Quite beautiful =]