Eclipse with a twist

Eclipse with a twist

20.2K Reads 87 Votes 11 Part Story
Emma Cooler By EmmaCooler Updated Jun 18, 2012

This is about when Edward leaves Bella and 1000 years pass until they meet again

Redwritingonthewalls Redwritingonthewalls Oct 04, 2013
This was really short! Only 7 lines! It was a little confusing because at the start you were saying that Bella wouldnt forgive them and then Edward proposes and she says yes and she forgave them all. It was too confusing
XxGhostOfARose3xX XxGhostOfARose3xX Sep 21, 2011
i like it, its really good, but i cant really understand what people are saying? there is no enters when people talk, no punctuation and no ". but still fab! :)
Kataholic95 Kataholic95 Mar 20, 2011
@EmmaCooler just trying to help, you don't have to be rude about it.
Kataholic95 Kataholic95 Mar 19, 2011
want some friendly advice?
                              
                              When putting dialogue in, you must make them their own line with " " around the dialogue, ya dig?