This is about when Edward leaves Bella and 1000 years pass until they meet again
This was really short! Only 7 lines! It was a little confusing because at the start you were saying that Bella wouldnt forgive them and then Edward proposes and she says yes and she forgave them all. It was too confusing
i like it, its really good, but i cant really understand what people are saying? there is no enters when people talk, no punctuation and no ". but still fab! :)
@EmmaCooler just trying to help, you don't have to be rude about it.
want some friendly advice?
When putting dialogue in, you must make them their own line with " " around the dialogue, ya dig?