If this is Life, then what's Hell?

If this is Life, then what's Hell?

4.1K Reads 63 Votes 16 Part Story
Kat By Light-Onyx Completed

Gracie has the worst family problems anyone could imagine. She gets beaten almost to death everyday. But one day she get tired of it! She fights back, only to basically kill her parents. Now, the police is after her, and her boyfriend who somehow gets dragged in the mess. When their only hope get kidnapped by none other than her cousin, where will Gracie end? AndAlex, well, Alex is decent. Where will this story end? Only one way to find out...

Light-Onyx Light-Onyx Aug 25, 2011
Ohhhhhh, ok thnx. I didnt mean to sound anything other than confused
SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld Aug 23, 2011
its a good story only one thing ur dialogues seems little confusing they are all in 1 para, y dont u chng line while writing dialogues, it'll become easy to read....:-)
                              
                              plot seems good so m votin.....!!!
Gotta_Luv_It Gotta_Luv_It Mar 02, 2011
Lol, this is really interesting. I hope u don't mind, but im going to library! wait, of COURSE u wouln't mind because it says to tell u wen some 1 libraries ur books. well, i  libraried them both! 
Light-Onyx Light-Onyx Feb 23, 2011
@Zwriter thnx. ummmmmmm, i aded a flashback becuase... idk, but i thought it wuz cool. u ok wit tht?
Light-Onyx Light-Onyx Feb 13, 2011
@trishthewriter ok, thnx 4 the tips! :D
                              @Asha1926 how do u want to know more about the characters? do i put them in the story or...
Light-Onyx Light-Onyx Jan 18, 2011
oh wow, thank u!!!!! but i don't realy hav an editor, but i guess i can ask my firends to help. im not the best speller, but i guess i can work something out wit them. than u so much 4 checking out me book! i really appretiate it.