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Stitch Girls

Stitch Girls

3.1K Reads 350 Votes 6 Part Story
Kristin Jacques By krazydiamond Updated Feb 24

They called them the Patchwork Men.

Loyal flesh golems, pieced together from the fallen soldiers on the battlefield. Fuel for the endless war between the Ottoman Republic and the savages of the Byzantine Empire. It is the alchemists who bring them to life, with secret etchings and chemicals, but it is the Stitch Girls who create them.

Needle and thread to make a new man out of many.  

When the draft called for Lillian's husband, he vowed to send her a letter from the front every day. The last one arrived two years ago, along with a silver badge of service. She was one of the lucky ones, at least she knew what happened to her beloved. As a Stitch Girl, she has a secret purpose, recording little details: tattoos, birthmarks, scars. 
There are many who never hear from their men again. Too many.

She sews up the Patchwork Men, more flesh for the front, etching the symbols to wipe them clean until one night, she messes up.

What to do with a Patchwork Man who is not so loyal to the Republic?

I love the idea of this, right from the idea, blurb and first chapter. I'll definitely will be reading on. You write so beautifully, mixing in the horror and sadness. 
                              Especially like their particularity with the eyes.  They are the very first to rot.
storiesaresouls storiesaresouls Oct 14, 2016
How do you continually come up with wonderful ideas like this? It's awe inspiring, really.
TraceyJo- TraceyJo- Oct 13, 2016
I just love your writing and the concept is so fresh. I'm looking forward to reading more. Wonderful start!
BasicallyCat BasicallyCat Oct 15, 2016
Your way of thinking is so awe inspiring, I wish I could write like that!
nanoxide nanoxide Oct 13, 2016
「Dirty apron, clean skirts」 is that a reference to Ratatouille's 「messy apron, clean sleeves」?Secret Disney lover eh 😝
KristyPerkins3 KristyPerkins3 Oct 13, 2016
I can't wait to read more! I've never read something like this and the way you write it is so amazing! I can't wait!