Saccharine

Saccharine

836 Reads 139 Votes 11 Part Story
A n n a By Annabunanna Updated Oct 23

ˈsakərʌɪn,-ɪn,-iːn/
adjective

1 • excessively sweet or sentimental ✨

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- - Oct 23
I really like your story so far! 😃 It's heartfelt and relatable, and you definitely put a lot of effort into writing it.
She keeps so many thoughts to herself. Kinda makes me realize how adults have to spellcheck everything before delivering the final line 🙄😂
I wouldn't let her be ungrateful I stg like I would make sure she knows how to behave
I'm up for grilled cheese sandwich any day but eating it every day sounds like a punishment. The appeal will be totally lost 😓
heartache... I've never experienced a toothache. Heartache however I've experienced.  In my opinion nothing hurts more than your emotions hurting... If that makes any sense at all 😂
Best characters are the ones in torment. 
                              I MEANT TO NOT SOUND SADIST AAA