Lost In Translation

1 Part Story 540 Reads 16 Votes
Ben Carey By BenCarey Updated 4 years ago
The fifth voyage of Gulliver. He is stranded on an island full of bears that walk on two legs and finds it exceedingly difficult to communicate with them. [Written in 2011. An exercise in voice].
Wow, very nice Swiftian pastiche.  It does have a feel of Gulliver to the narration and a kingdom of obnoxious bears could fit right in with his travels. Although I'm pretty sure Morse Code was invented after Swift died...but so what...
^_^ interesting idea of communicating by urination. I hope you are continuing the story
Well, the concepts imagined are brilliant, as usual. But I got the sense this is not finished. Is it finished? Otherwise it's great! Kind of feels like Gulliver's Travels. Beautiful!