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His Mistake

His Mistake

13.4K Reads 456 Votes 5 Part Story
Isabella Eng By goldbubbles_15 Updated Oct 14, 2016

He destroyed her, but little did he know, that by destroying her, he was destroying himself too.

Cassandra Stinefeld  is a happy and bubbly girl, she didn't have a wealthy family. And she was liked by many people and hated by some.

Julian White is a billionaire that has a heart of ice and is a workaholic.He was once happily married to Cassandra but they didn't strong enough against people and their bitter rumors. So, they divorced.

But would fate have different plans for them? Or will they go their separate ways with no regrets? Join them in a story of both love and heartbreak.

I'm not lying but when it said "the last batch of cookies are ready" I thought it said "the last bitch--" wait what! Lol
WilmaShakespeare WilmaShakespeare Oct 15, 2016
interesting so. you just have to improve grammar. and because you don't use punctuation marks, sometimes the dialogue is confusing. but great job
undoubtedlymine undoubtedlymine Oct 12, 2016
Story is interesting..
                              I like the changes. Story is more detailed now. happy to read it again.  :)