Unexpected turn

Unexpected turn

349 Reads 3 Votes 9 Part Story
Dakota Monroe By DropDeadDakota Updated Jan 19, 2011

Dakota thought she had it all going until the day her parents turned on her and her sister veronica. Beating them to the point one might commit suicide. Living in a foster home they both figure its hard to live apart from one another. Who will be the stronger one?

DropDeadDakota DropDeadDakota Jan 10, 2011
@ArtyGirl  thankyou for letting me know whut you think so far. Im just starting it tonight. its been a while since ive wrote anything. and when i did it wasnt ever really for anyone to read
ArtyGirl ArtyGirl Jan 10, 2011
Okay, but it seems sort of point form - real people don't talk like that... >.>
                              
                              And "Unexpected" there's no 'S' :3
                              
                              Don't mean to be mean or anything, I'd love to see where it goes...
DropDeadDakota DropDeadDakota Jan 10, 2011
HEY LET ME KNOW WHUT YOU THINK SO FAR THIS WILL BE MY FIRST STORY SO I KINDA NEED TO KNOW... :D
                              
                              hope you all enjoy it.