Outsystem: A Military Science Fiction Space Opera Epic

Outsystem: A Military Science Fiction Space Opera Epic

897 Reads 51 Votes 4 Part Story
M. D. Cooper By soyarma Completed

In the spirit of great Space Opera by Peter F Hamilton, Jack Campbell, and Larry Niven comes Aeon 14. If you love strong heroines like Kris Longknife, then you're going to love Tanis Richards. 

Major Richards needs to get out of the Sol System

Demoted by the military and hung out to dry, the media labels her the Butcher of Toro. Despite her soiled record, Tanis still one of the best military counter-insurgency officers in the Terran Space Force. 

And they need her to find the terrorists responsible for trying to destroy the GSS Intrepid, a massive interstellar colony ship in the final phases of construction at the Mars Outer Shipyards.

It'll be her ticket out of the Sol system, but Tanis discovers she is up against more than mercenaries and assassins. Major corporations and governments have a vested interest in ensuring the Intrepid never leaves Sol, ultimately pitting Tanis against factions inside her own military.

With few friends left, Tanis will need to fight for her life to get outsystem.

Contains violence and some foul language. 17+ recommended.

The sentence that cracked me up was, "You keep forgetting I have organic eyes." I just burst out laughing!
                              I like the length of these chapters. They're amazing, will have to read on...
@soyarma Mind if I get a couple of tips from you? I would really like to improve my writing...
I agree with the comment below 100%
                              Also, it's descriptive and awesome.
You write action very well! I was pulled into the story right of the bat!
Even though I have no idea what you mean by "Space Opera" this is very good. Hopefully you gain more viewers.
Amy_DuBoff Amy_DuBoff Oct 12
I love it when a book starts with an action sequence! Very nice opening. Looking forward to reading more :-).