Never Have I Ever{Completed}|| Under Editing

Never Have I Ever{Completed}|| Under Editing

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CreativeOblivion By CreativeOblivion Completed

This story is under major editing to fill plot gaps and create the best and most original storyline ever. Special thanks to Violets Review Service for her amazing review on my novel. 
Best: #272 in Mystery/Thriller

Two years ago, the teenage suicide of Kellie Lovel devastated the town of Calico, Florida. Now, her nine best friends are about to reunite in the house that she died in, get a little drunk, and come to terms with the tragedy that shattered their friendship into pieces. However, little did they know that as soon as they set foot in the house, the tables would turn.

The clock  hits midnight, and the nine teenagers realize they are not alone. Little notes are left around the house for each of the friends to answer, notes that will reveal their deepest secrets. The rules are simple: answer honestly, or die.

Never have I ever told the truth, isn't that right?

Cover credit to cosmology graphics :)

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VioletSun5 VioletSun5 Oct 29, 2017
This is an incredibly difficult way in which to kill oneself, which already has me suspecting she was murdered. If this isn't your intent you may want to pick another method, if it was then you're fine.
VioletSun5 VioletSun5 Oct 29, 2017
I'd almost cut these three paragraphs because they don't flow well, but I can see their purpose. I can't think of a way to actually make this better but there probably is one...
Anonymous7105 Anonymous7105 Sep 04, 2017
From the summary, it sounds interesting. And the characters seem good so far. It kinda lacks detail but I like the story so I'm gonna keep reading. 
annaibrahim annaibrahim Sep 25, 2017
                              Love the story but there are potholes in the plot like why Andrew couldn't hold his ground about his dislike with the travel
agoldenpanda agoldenpanda Sep 18, 2017
                              It's a very interesting start!  I love how it's easy to understand but also adds a layer of mystery!  The detail and word choice is also really nice!  I love all the description that is being added... keep it up!
Pomegranate0925 Pomegranate0925 Sep 12, 2017
 #LC wow I imagined all the scenes that you have written. By the way i like the title too. it's poetic.