Undeniable Demand for Truth

Undeniable Demand for Truth

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Seracewar By aractor Updated Nov 03

More missing person reports have been filed.  No one is asking the right questions except for Delta, a girl who believes she's next.  Once her fears are proven to have good cause, Delta takes matters into her own hands to find the truth.  The truth she finds, however, is not at all what she expected.
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I can relate to that.. ☺ & I literally smiled while reading this 'cause my brother always do that ❤
cityhearts cityhearts Oct 28
I like the flow of the scene! :) nothing was rushed and it was vividly described. The mood was also fitting for the genre. I like this first chapter and how you made the readers already curious.
I quite liked this chapter. It was written really good, transitioning from one scene to the next without dragging. 
                              Love the interesting name of the character too. Delta!
Graceal123 Graceal123 Oct 17
I loved the detail a lot. I am not a fan of writings like this usually, but this different. A good different.  Would you read "What happened in that House?" Please I would like input for detail.
But not because of any major thing like this...this just proves I am not normal 😱
I like how you introduced the story and described the whole setting and thoughts, without letting it drag on for too long. Although, I felt like the sentences didn't have a good flow so try rephrasing certain sentences if possible ^^