A Whisper In The Forest

A Whisper In The Forest

1.9K Reads 340 Votes 23 Part Story
Ronnie Debb By RonnieDebb Updated Dec 25, 2016

[Highest ranked #19 in Mystery/Thriller.]

Currently on Hold.

"Dante tried to calm his mind, knowing that the hunter was closing in on him. He could feel the distinct aura that the hunter radiated. It was stronger than any other he had experienced before, a malevolent force that seemed to set his nerves on fire."

Samantha Laine's life was as monotonous as the sea, until that fateful drive in the rain. A strange child with queer scars on his head collided with her car and started a chain of events.

Who was the boy? What were those scars? Samantha was about to know everything about him, and his horrifying past, even as a mysterious entity is on their trial...

[A lot of people have helped me hone  my skills by pointing out mistakes and suggesting improvements. So, this book will undergo a considerable amount of editing based on what I have learnt.  Thanks to all those who have helped me.!  ]

Book cover design by #IzzyM99

temanguby temanguby Dec 14, 2016
 #wallflower
                              
                              O.m.g
                              O.m.g
                              
                              My jaw just dropped.
                              
                              O.m.g. That was so good. So good. 
                              
                              You described everything so well  you built the suspense.
                              Your writing style is amazing.
                              
                              Great Job. I am so jealous.
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Daydreamer_Annie Daydreamer_Annie Dec 19, 2016
 #wallflower 
                              
                              The first chapter is amazing! The little boy seems like somewhat not a ordinary human. I am super hooked to your story. Can't wait to read more!
                              
                              The style of your writing is quite flowy. Keep up the good word.❤
ljwrites85 ljwrites85 Oct 14, 2016
Only a minor point, she collided hard with a tree but didn't get whiplash or at least jolted her seat belt a bit?
SGHADINA SGHADINA an hour ago
 #wallflower 
                              
                              My god! This first chapter is so interesting! So many questions are running through my head like who or what was that red eyed person or creature. Keep up the good work.
Storiesaremytissues Storiesaremytissues Nov 19, 2016
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                              Great first chapter! No mistakes and a great suspense! Maybe you could make it a bit longer.
This is really good so far! I couldn't see anything wrong with grammar or spelling, and the story is unique. Good job!