Seekers

Seekers

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~Liann ^-^ By liann_aixa Completed

Ever had that nightmare where you're falling from somewhere and then, just before you hit the ground, you wake up? Well, in that case, you're lucky because with me, I always hit the ground... Hard. Vivid nightmares have always corroded my dreams, making it impossible for me to sleep soundly, ever since I could remember. Nobody could ever explain why.

I've never really considered myself normal. It didn't really help that I started to see people that others couldn't. But when I finally got close to the feeling of being normal; when I got great friends and a loving boyfriend, I found out why I never felt that way. After meeting one person, someone who was meant to protect me and guide me, I finally understood everything. The people I saw were ghosts. I am the bridge to help them cross over. I am a Seeker.

HIGHEST RANK: #96 in Paranormal (8.5.2016) ^-^ Thanks so much, guys!!

theemmpress theemmpress Aug 15
So exciting to read this knowing what I know from SW! Also? Never had a physical description of Eric before. I didn't even realise he was super hot!
From the last sentence I suggest making a separate paragraph
Omg this is so cute. You've made me ship two people together in one chapter lol
margee212 margee212 Mar 31
You've done a really great job of establishing her character here. I feel like I really know a lot about Jennifer already, but you didn't state facts, you showed the reader, which makes the story really smooth
darthallow darthallow Jul 05
Great writing, and it's honestly a relief to read about a football player who isn't a total jerk to every girl. I love her mom XD Voted!
Overall, this is a good way to start a book. The only thing you should try to focus on more is the flow of your story and where to place punctuation marks. Just keep writing! It's a very good and enjoyable story 😊 Ps. 'Player 15' sounds hella cute