The Magical Forest

The Magical Forest

9.1K Reads 602 Votes 17 Part Story
Edith West By angel_edith28 Updated Aug 03

Olivia is a sixteen year old girl living with her stepfamily. Fed up with their cruelty, she runs into a forbidden forest near her house. In the forest she experiences magic.

She meets the most unusual creatures and makes the most unusual group of friends.

Let us join her in her journey to the unusual world of magic.

everythinggoodhere everythinggoodhere Oct 13, 2016
Nice first chapter btw I just began to write a book please check it out the top 3 most active people will get a character named after them
firewinner firewinner Oct 13, 2016
This is really nicely written but you could add lots of these sentences together, to make it less stilted.
_ilovereading1904_ _ilovereading1904_ Oct 18, 2016
I like this chapter ☺. Its really good. Its pretty similar to Cinderella except the sisters aren't so mean ☺ I like it. :)
imanidrps imanidrps Oct 17, 2016
I like the story but the stepmother is such a meany at least the sisters a nicer
somiwtp somiwtp Nov 04, 2016
Is it just me or the base of the story really seems similar to Cindrella
TheHotCakes TheHotCakes Nov 26, 2016
Is it just me, or is this a Alice in Wonderland/ Cinderella crossover re-telling thingamajiggy?