Haunted by the past

Haunted by the past

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MmaroZ By MmaroZ Completed

Maddie sees her twenty fifth birthday as being the turning point in her life. She feels unloved and worthless, she made one mistake as a teenager and it's hung over her ever since. But she has a new job on the horizon, and this could be what she needs to kick start her plans, see her start to live at last. 
With a spring in her step she looks to the future until she realises that all is not as it seems, and nothing is ever that easy.

MalditangMahiyain MalditangMahiyain Sep 06, 2014
Hmmm.. I didn't say anything about not liking it. It was actually fun when I realized that I was unconciously (mentally) shouting whenever there's an exclamation point. It didn't affect the story or how the character expresses herself, for me tho that is. But, no I didn't. I stopped reading it.
MalditangMahiyain MalditangMahiyain Sep 05, 2014
Am i the only one mentally shouting whenever there's an exclamation point at the end of the sentence? lol
XxKillOrBeKilledXx XxKillOrBeKilledXx May 28, 2014
Little bit if constructive criticism try not to use exclamation marks so much. It takes away from the reading.
Abbehhh48 Abbehhh48 May 25, 2014
Evan is one of the actors names and Tate was his season 1 character's name lol
genevwaa18 genevwaa18 May 19, 2014
At first, it was kinda boring but when She meet again the guy she sneaked out couple of nights ago, the story turned- interesting! ;)
radler283 radler283 May 16, 2014
I was starting wonder before this happen if the guy she slept with and left would wind up being Evan. I can't believe I am right!!!