A story that is kind of special to me.
Oh I saw that story on fanfiction.net The best chapter for me was the 15th chapter (for reasons XD)
That's not true............when i swear I just yell "AAAGGGHHHH CURSE WORD"
When you say it was worse I expected much more grammars errors like you said but that is totally good
Mako is always getting captured sooo I have a reasonable guess on what's going to happen.
This sounds way too much like me. In fact its exactly like me... Strange.