A story that is kind of special to me.
Oh I saw that story on fanfiction.net The best chapter for me was the 15th chapter (for reasons XD)
When you say it was worse I expected much more grammars errors like you said but that is totally good
Mako is always getting captured sooo I have a reasonable guess on what's going to happen.
Bro I read this story on fanfiction and I want to sat it is amazing
Dude, it doesn't matter if it holds a special place in your heart, there is this thing called making your fans happy
and by you just not changing the spelling and grammar to make it better