The Spring Demon

The Spring Demon

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Mew By Jaytea Updated Jan 09, 2011

The barbaric Ilkorian mages have invaded Kirone, leaving a scar of destruction across a once-peaceful kingdom. But as a surprise raid sweeps through the village of Charnoh, young wife-to-be Shalite finds that not all is as it seems: She is of mage blood, and her rescuers are mages called "Lethians." As Shalite delves deeper into the motivations of the Lethians and Ilkorians, a great unwinding of secrets begins: intrigue, forbidden love, an intricate past of lies and illusions: and soon she begins to realize that the greatest secret of all is within herself.

KaitlynP KaitlynP Jan 17, 2011
You're description is amazing, very detailed. The way you described the village was almost haunting. Though the names are very complicated (obviously because of where it's set and the genre). Maybe a way to pronounce them at the start?
Jaytea Jaytea Jan 14, 2011
@mhmmHaille aaaaaaaaaah man I'd actually gotten that comment a while ago but I wasn't sure at the time how to address it. Reading it today, I see what you mean. Revised! :D Thanks for the crit~~