When Dreams Replace Life

When Dreams Replace Life

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MsPerceptionRiot By MsPerceptionRiot Completed

As if growing up a foster child wasn't enough> I had to ad feeling completely disconnected from the norm. Always aching for something missing, and more then just absent parents. Not to mention the dreams that left me yearning for a life I didn't expect to be part of.

fallingstar930 fallingstar930 Jan 12, 2011
I loved this, I hope you will write more about what happens in their life. One thing I noticed is there are grammatical errors that need fixing. Things like: than instead of then, definitely instead of defiantly. Great job though!