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The Disease

The Disease

2.3K Reads 99 Votes 29 Part Story
Summr_Dreams By Summr_Dreams Updated Jan 18

This story contains mature contents. 

This is a strange disease. It is delicious and delirious; beautiful and vicious; erotic and rich; poor yet lush; crazy to the extent of being wild; lovely and wonderful, and bloody murderous...
Jenna thinks she is suffering from it; but, she might not be the only one.  
    ...Beware. This disease is contagious.

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Cover is a part of a painting by Serge Mershennikov.

JavierLopez318 JavierLopez318 Nov 07, 2016
Interesting and different! I like play of hallucination vs. dream vs. excited mind... Will continue with next part :)
"Cool down, she thought" may be a better way to apply this without over explaining.  I'm a huge victim of over explaining lol. It's a hard habit to break.
nataliakasten01 nataliakasten01 Nov 05, 2016
Nocturnal is an adjective so this makes no sense, maybe "of the nocturnal predator" is better?
nataliakasten01 nataliakasten01 Nov 05, 2016
I think it's already clear that she didn't say it out loud so the second part of the sentence "just thought in her mind" is unnecessary.