The Power Within

The Power Within

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CarlyCoombe By CarlyCoombe Updated Mar 29, 2017

Do you know what it's like to have been lied to your whole life? To know that you are someone completely different than what you expected? Of corse not, no one knows the pain that I go through every day just to get through it and then come home to...nothing.  Ever since I can remember I've lived in foster homes jumping from home to home, never fitting in long enough to stay.  My name is Eloise Marie Clark, or so I have been told, and this is the story of how my world changed when I found out who I really am...

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buddy227 buddy227 Jan 25
I wish...I'm like that too, but I'm sometimes kicked out, so...it sucks.
buddy227 buddy227 Jan 25
Is Den Father like a place that they call home, or does it go for another reference.
thequeenofslay019 thequeenofslay019 Feb 27, 2017
I just want to say that this is an awesome intro. I can tell the story will be great the more I read.
Jalex_Kellic_life Jalex_Kellic_life Apr 23, 2016
So as we get started, ima just warn you. I comment A LOT! So be prepared.
_staryeyed_ _staryeyed_ May 03, 2016
I'm like her but my hair is a bit curlier and I have deep brown eyes almost looking black
Amazingly_Amazing15 Amazingly_Amazing15 Jul 28, 2016
So is she 17 or 18? Coz in the beginning, you said 17, and a few pages later, she's 18? But it's great other then that!