A Burning Desire (ON HOLD) SORRY!

A Burning Desire (ON HOLD) SORRY!

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Emily By EmmyMarie_18 Updated Aug 06, 2011

Loretta never knew there were others like her and her brother Lloyd. So when she finds out she thinks they are her enemies, but somehow she get's stuck with Saul, a Dark One that is like her and her brother with a different gift. She should hate him, and she does, but Saul is beautiful dark and charming, she doesn't know what to do when feelings for him start to form. 
Loretta is confused, she has feelins for two men, one that has been there for her and her brother her whole life and one that should be the enemy. She has to make a decision soon, or she'll loose everyone.

EmmyMarie_18 EmmyMarie_18 Jan 09, 2011
@VampireLove14 yeah sorry about that cause they heaps long on word lol and i'll go back a fix it up in maybe chapter one and describe her for you :) i really appreciate the feed back  
VampirerZz VampirerZz Jan 09, 2011
I like it :D Maybe , make the chapters longer, like paragraphs? :) and could you describe what loretta looks like :D Thanks! keep on going !