Bound to a Shadow Warrior (A Fantasy/Paranormal Novel)

Bound to a Shadow Warrior (A Fantasy/Paranormal Novel)

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CelesteLyn By CLyn0607 Updated Aug 05, 2013

“This show sucks.” He said gruffly, halting her from what she was currently doing, which was extending her arm out in an offer of sharing her Cheetos. She quickly pulled her arm back and gasped, offended. 
“Take that back, right now. Sherlock does not suck! It is a freaking unbelievably awesome television show!” she demanded as she now clutched the Cheetos bag to her chest, “And to think I was going to ask if you wanted any of my Cheetos!” 
Luca shrugged his shoulders as he snatched the remote that she had abandoned on the couch between them. “I don’t like Cheetos.”
Devlin nearly had a heart attack when he said that. He didn’t like Sherlock or Cheetos!? What was he!? An Alien!? She was in such shock that she didn’t even notice the fact that he had been channel surfing. By the time she finally looked to the T.V and saw that Benedict Cumberbatch’s face was nowhere to be seen, Luca had already hidden the remote between the couch cushions. Face flushed red in frustration, Devlin just about throttled Luca, and was just reaching behind his head in order to smack him when the sound of the front door opening made her halt in place. 

High school senior, Devlin Mcphee finds herself in a whole new world when she meets the towns local bad boy, Luca. Luca Gemson is the type of person that people tend to avoid. Leather jacket, black nail polish and a piercing glare, he  just has an air of creepiness that scares everyone away. And yet Devlin finds herself slowly being dragged into his world of shadows. No matter where she turns the shadows are there, whispering, watching, preying, and the only one who can keep her safe is Luca.

Kshooey Kshooey Jan 17, 2013
Hey  I really like it a lot!!! I do agree with the others but its still pretty good!!
CLyn0607 CLyn0607 Jan 17, 2013
@DestinyGeo @Cassie_21 thank you for the correction! I will definitely fix this when editing the chapters =)
ActuallyLaura ActuallyLaura Jan 17, 2013
Just make sure when someone replies you start a new paragraph :)
XxEscapeTheFateXx XxEscapeTheFateXx Jan 05, 2012
Fantabulous, my dear. Btdubbs, it's 'you're' a couple times in there xP