Dream Girl

Dream Girl

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DeeDoll By danii___ Completed

Derrick is a 28year old single father. Left alone with his daughter Diamond at 13, 

Derrick soon realized he had to be a man and provide for his daughter. 
Having no luck finding work, he dropped out of high school at 16 to join the streets with His righthand mans, Zyir. 

Zyir was already far in a hustle in Washington D.C. so he Joined his Team.
Derrick soon felt that what's better to have the lavish life, than share it with someone he can call wife.

Will Derrick meet his Dream Girl?

Uhm.. You cant take a baby home the Same day that it is born 🤔
- - Sep 18, 2015
Holdup... Pause... It's one thing to be 16 and having sex. But, how you 16 having sex with a 13 year old? 0.o
- - Sep 18, 2015
Damn she just had sex with him the other night and already pregnant? Well, okay...
HerbanLegend HerbanLegend Nov 22, 2013
I think that you should separate different people's dialogue into different paragraphs. It makes the format easier to navigate and it's more fluid.