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If I Say Yes, Can I Hold Your Gun? (EDITING)

If I Say Yes, Can I Hold Your Gun? (EDITING)

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Jen By JennaMariaxo Updated Aug 19, 2015

Angelina was used to working long, hard hours to support her large family. Especially since her father had passed away. It wasn't until Angelina caught the eye of a man of wealth and the elite. A powerful, handsome, possessive man . . . 

"Why do you insist on getting all worked up? I am not here to harm you, and to be completely truthful I'm a little insulted that you would assume that about me." His tone was laced with some sort of dark humor. 

"What do you want from me?"

"Marry me."

And what if he made her an offer she couldn't refuse?

Devaglo Devaglo Jan 22, 2012
Some plot holes but I got the gist of it. It's easy to pick up, though requires some editing. The ending: 5 million dollars for marrying her was kind of unexpected and also a good cliffhanger. Overall, it was good. ^^
JennaMariaxo JennaMariaxo Jan 06, 2012
@Yeahbabyyeah I truly appreciate your feedback and I thank you. I sometimes struggle with writing with the reader's perspective in mind. I will make adjustments and further try to make my writing as impeccable as I potentially can.
JennaMariaxo JennaMariaxo Jan 06, 2012
@All-Star Thank you so much, I hope I can exceed your expectations. I'll try my best :-)
Wattpad Wattpad Jan 05, 2012
You're off to a great start, @JennaMariaxo. Thanks for the dedication!