The Slutty maid

The Slutty maid

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crazymarin55 By crazymarin55 Updated Dec 28, 2017

Jane:" No please leave me alone i dont want to "

Nick:" come on ur my maid and u have to do what i tell u "

he slaped me and i fell on his arms. he took me to his room and layed me down on his bed.  he moved my legs appart. i could tell he was looking down my body.

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What the h.ell is this, so unfortunate when you have a good idea but your writing is so shitty. 1/10 i cant read this, my eyes burning.
char7797 char7797 Apr 23
I kno it's a POV but I don't think we need to see Nick:....... Jane:...... is that her name?
vbngarcia vbngarcia Apr 04
I think the writer isn’t fluent in English but great effort for making a story👏🏻👌🏻
imapuppy imapuppy Apr 24, 2016
Book losses interest will spelling errors and text lingo  if you fix that I would be better